User talk:Jakobkatchem/Trivium

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Nice work, Jakob. Your edits add depth, perspective, and clarity about the relationship between the trivium and quadrivium. All of the edits, large and small seem good, though cutting the second half of the one quote might be debatable. I could go either way on that one. The only edit I would make is to your phrase: "Civic life was greatly developing during this period and would entail..." This seem wordy. Why not simply "Civic life developing during this period entailed ..." You are almost there! --Jbdolphin (talk) 06:20, 14 May 2021 (UTC)