User talk:Jaksawatp

Hi Jaksawat -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kanesskong (talk • contribs) 12:50, 20 January 2016

Crucible tong
Hi Jaksawatp! You need to work a lot harder. --Taweetham (talk) 06:25, 7 February 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) References should be in-line and properly formatted by cite web
 * 2) More content in encyclopedic tone.
 * 3) Your original photos.  Make sure you upload it to Wikimedia Commons and you may want to create a new category for crucible tong.

ICCH224 update
Hi Jaksawatp! Looks like you're on the right track. Here is what you can do to improve the article: --Athikhun (talk) 15:06, 17 February 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) 3 drawings of crucible Tongs may be too redundant. How about taking pictures of the real ones?
 * 2) Move the content from your sandbox to a new article, Crucible tongs. If you cannot, please let ajarn know in class.

Thank you for your work and wonderful drawing. Please --Taweetham (talk) 02:50, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Add internal links to your article.
 * 2) Improve your writing by following Manual_of_Style/Chemistry and follow examples of other articles.  There should be no section called "Insight."