User talk:Jalenrose8/Seattle Surge

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing.

I see that you've copied this article into your sandbox, but I don't see any edits. Please let me know if I'm looking in the wrong spot.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:48, 28 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi,
 * Thanks for letting me know what happened. It looks like you put a version live on Wikipedia as well as a version in your sandbox. There are some differences between the two, so I'm not sure which one you're moving forward with. As you mentioned on discord, in addition to the revert, you'll see that you got some feedback from Wikipedians about your work. Please take their thoughts into account as you are making your changes -- here in the sandbox -- and do talk to us about your article before making changes on the live version of Wikipedia.


 * I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.


 * One key area for improvement is the choice of sources. Fandom, blogs and promotional sites that don't follow a strict code of quality are usually not acceptable. Another area to improve as you revise is maintaining a "Neutral Point of View" about this topic. You'll find more ideas in this Wikipedia policy: WP:NPOV. You may find the Esports task force of the Videogames Wikiproject has some helpful resources including style guides and examples: WikiProject_Video_games/Esports. The umbrella project -- Wikiproject Video games -- has a large area full of information about sources they consider reliable: WikiProject_Video_games/Sources.


 * Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:18, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

Follow Up
Hi

I am not seeing any changes from when we talked about this before -- sourcing is still an issue. Please let me know if I'm looking in the wrong spot (I'm checking https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jalenrose8/Seattle_Surge).

Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:30, 12 February 2022 (UTC)