User talk:Jalshenique/sandbox

FEEDBACK: 1.	Organized, sensible order? Chronologically? a.	The order of the information is great. However, I would organize the paragraphs with more tabs and underlined sections to make it easier to read.

2.	There are no unnecessary stuff and it is all on topic. Good Job!

3.	Great job keeping the information unbiased.

4.	Phrases like “they need” and “they do not need” may give away your stance on the issue.

5.	The information is not more negative or positive, good job

6.	The case study is a great addition, but I might put that section at the end.

7.	Make your topic well known at the top of the page

Pwells5 (talk) 14:54, 17 March 2016 (UTC)@pwells5