User talk:Jaltenb/sandbox

Hi Joshua, I'm your peer reviewer, Darek Wojtaszek. I figured I'd wait until closer to the end, when the majority, if not all of the article is written. Your article is well structured, I just have one question, at the end of each paragraph, you have one citation, is that citation for the whole paragraph? For example, in the effects section, you have two paragraphs with one citation each, which I'm assuming would be used throughout the whole paragraph. Also, I would add in a section, or even in the intro what makes a stain, an inbred strain.

ah, yes most of the time when there is a citation at the end of a paragraph, everything above it is part of the same citation, as far as i know it is the same in wikipedia because i see it all over the place. I can add into the lead what makes an inbred strain an inbred strain, but that is already in the actual article, sorry, my sandbox is not very structured, and half of the stuff there was from the original article — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jaltenb (talk • contribs) 18:22, 28 November 2017 (UTC)