User talk:JamWoz/sandbox

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I really enjoyed reading about Rashmi Misra from your article. I think you’ve got a good start to a successful Wikipedia entry! I liked that you focused on her life and her contributions. I think it would be helpful for you to use subheadings to organize and focus your thoughts. This will allow you to focus on one aspect of her life and her contributions at a time. Furthermore, I think using some in text citations and quotes from your research will help complete your article. Lastly, I would avoid using things like her being very inspiring and being able to inspire others. While these statements are true, they give your article a bias whereas I think it would be more successful to focus on the facts for this particular assignment! I look forward to seeing more about Rashmi in your article, good luck! Tmutc001 (talk) 03:15, 4 April 2018 (UTC)