User talk:JamesAndrewPaterson1987/sandbox

Review of Article: James, this looks great so far - I think the use of sub headings is particularly effective in organizing the topics. For your VERY FIRST sentence I might recommend adding a clause that immediately tells the reader you will be looking at issues.

E.g. " the DRC has many endemic species and biodiveristy, both of which are threatened by a variety of hazards including X, Y, Z.

Thus far you have a clear structure, neutral viewpoint and are filling out the additional sections for balanced content. Keep filling up the sections - you are on the right track.Grossmbh (talk) 17:51, 28 October 2018 (UTC)