User talk:JamesOckelford

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 01:23, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

The Guardian cite is a great improvement, you just need to find a few more authoritative sources like that to prove the "claims to fame" in the article and prove this is a bar worth having an article about. Good start, just hunt up some more footnotes. I've also cleaned up your formatting for you. MatthewVanitas (talk) 01:25, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 North Bar, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Ritchie333 (talk)  (cont)   15:04, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
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