User talk:Jamesbob2000/sandbox

Review- I think that the information you add is going to be very valuable to this article. I would recommended adding it to the talk page so we can see what you have not and not just what was already present in the article Keehan19 (talk) 23:40, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

The Camp Conditions
This is a good section to add, but I would be careful with it being too biased or emotionally drawn. Cmwestfall (talk) 15:52, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

i made sure to make the camp conditions as unbiased as possible by sticking to the facts. all my work is in sandbox and old versions can be accessed. Jamesbob2000 (talk) 16:59, 26 October 2018 (UTC)