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Article Evaluation
Henry Roe Campbell -The article has very long quote that is not necessary. -There was an entire section going into detail about his father's work with very little information about Henry. -Henry made major contributions to railway systems in the Philadelphia area, having a hand in most of the railroad work.

Internal Rate Of Return -This article is very confusing to someone who does not already ahve background knowledge in this field -Some of the words used were biased and seemed as if they were making suggestions about different pros and cons

Time Value of Money -The article was poorly written with a lot of irrelevant information -The history section is not the history but better yet a story of a time when the concept was used. -A large portion of the article simple shows the different mathematical ways to calculate time value of money