User talk:Jameswang323/Civic Intelligence/Melissawwang Peer Review

From Melissa's comments and feedback, I think I will get rid of some irrelevant contents, as well as make the tone/some phrases of my article more neutral. I also like your idea of dividing my added paragraphs into different sections, and how how I should include an image or two. I will do both of these things in my next draft! Lastly, I will go through and edit my article to make sure there are no grammatical errors. Jameswang323 (talk) 00:53, 19 October 2019 (UTC)James Wang