User talk:Jamezy 7

Your submission at Articles for creation: Toby Bensimon (February 23)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Toby Bensimon (February 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Loksmythe were:

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Loksmythe (talk) 03:43, 23 February 2022 (UTC)

MfD nomination of Draft:Toby Bensimon
Draft:Toby Bensimon, a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:Toby Bensimon and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes ( ~ ). You are free to edit the content of Draft:Toby Bensimon during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you.  DGG ( talk ) 07:54, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Toby Bensimon (April 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Greenman were:

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Greenman (talk) 11:31, 4 April 2022 (UTC)


 * RE: This still reads as an advertisment, and is improperly sourced. For example, the single source for "Toby is also known for his charitable work and acts of kindness" makes no mention of the subject at all. Please also see WP:COI.
 * The source qouted clearly references the act of kindness by Toby Bensimon. Please see below:
 * Their plans were further boosted today when Shiels Jewellers donated two new engagement rings, and a $500 gift voucher.
 * Shiels managing director Toby Bensimon said he had read of the couple’s misfortune in The Advertiser and felt compelled to share the Christmas spirit.
 * “The original story was very touching, and I felt that I had to step in and help,” Mr Bensimon said. Jamezy 7 (talk) 01:36, 7 April 2022 (UTC)