User talk:Jamiepatel1/sandbox

Practice Edits
Hey Jamie, I hope everything is going well. I'm here to complete our class assignment. Good luck with the rest of the semester.

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This is where the peer review feedback for Jamiepatel1's sandbox draft content should be posted. Be sure to sign your post and complete the Canvas quiz to receive credit for your work. UWM.AP.Endo (talk) 03:50, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Kelsey Rice peer review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes

Are the citations formatted correctly? Although you have the articles cited, they are not formatted correctly. You do have the appropriate articles listed but it looks like you didn't make a specific references section/reflist in order to cite the articles.

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? yes- I looked at the main article that you are contributing to and under the prevalence section, the two sentences that you have in your sandbox are already in the article. Is this because you already made this edit to the article? if so, then great!

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? I like your prevalence contributions but if you wanted you could also look into possible risk factors for postpartum thyroiditis, since I didn't see much information on that in the main article

Kmr0077 (talk) 23:29, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes

Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes, but the sources are not in their appropriate section

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes, I'm guessing the prevalence section is what you have added or you have added in your sandbox to show what you're contributing to? If so, I think the John Hopkins paragraph is fitting.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? I think the signs and symptoms section could use bullet points like the causes section so there could be some consistency with the layout of the article. Otherwise I think the prevalence section is a great section to work on.

JSUWM (talk) 01:37, 23 November 2020 (UTC)