User talk:Jamiewang47/sandbox

"Overall, space ethics is a fairly new topic of interest, and many scholars in academia can agree on the need to conduct more policy research in order to establish a code of space ethics." I feel like this sentence is the kind of subjective thesis statement that might be inappropriate for Wikipedia. I feel as if the sentence could be deleted without affecting the content of your revisions as a whole.

"Furthermore, the advancement of life in space pertain to questions related to the ethics of biocentrism and anthropocentrism." I feel as if you could expand on the "questions" discussed in this section. What are they with regards to these other types of ethics? How do they interact with the ethics of space law? Douglas Firs (talk) 16:57, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

The first sentence should be more specific and directed to summarising or giving a overview of the section "Ethics", instead of listing related categories.(Pyramid Writing) Gabrielbsousa (talk) 17:00, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

The terms in this phrase "space exploration, space tourism, space ownership, the militarization of space, environmental protection, and the boundary separating earth and space" could be defined more clearly and could also serve as subheadings if you had more research. This sentence "space ethics is a fairly new topic of interest, and many scholars in academia can agree on the need to conduct more policy research in order to establish a code of space ethics." could use a citation or could be removed since it seems vague and unsupported at the moment.Ilena p (talk) 17:03, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

"Early discussions regarding space ethics revolved around whether or not the space frontier should be available for use, gaining prominence at the time of the Soviet Union and United States' Space Race.[4] More recent discussions focus on the need for the international community to draft and institute a code of space ethics to prevent the destruction of the space environment." I feel like you can expand on this section especially on the Space Race, maybe provide elaboration of it. As well as a citation for the reader to understand the international community trying to draft space ethics to provide common ground and understanding. Rasophia (talk) 17:05, 28 November 2018 (UTC)