User talk:Janaebrianne/Paternal depression

Emma Lewallen's Peer Review
First of all, I think this is wonderful that you are highlighting paternal depression because this is not a topic many people are educated on. I believe adding some information about what testosterone and estrogen do within the body could be beneficial to a reader- especially in the context of paternal depression. I noticed you had your references at the top of the page, but they can easily be submitted within the article and WIKI keeps track of your bibliography for you. I highly recommend doing that. I think it's really interesting the articles and research you are citing, so keep up the good work! I look forward to educating myself more on your topic! Emlew314 (talk) 01:34, 1 November 2023 (UTC)