User talk:Janaje16/sandbox

My plan for my next is to find, read, and cite a third source. Think about what needs to be changed or revised. At the moment the sandbox that I'm working on lacks clarification. So looking it over think about what needs more explanation or what needs to be removed. Watch for further feedback to be certain what actually needs clarification.

Feedback on draft
Jesus: It looks like you have good sources. I would perhaps expand the information you're pulling from them a tiny bit. It's a little unclear what the sources say, and it could use more explanation. Mbrzycki (talk) 20:12, 3 April 2019 (UTC)