User talk:Jandiicooper/sandbox

Instructor Comments:Change the title to something more straightforward. Also, you don't have any sources. Make sure you have at least 5 sources (2 of which should be scholarly) to back up your claims. Remember, you are not making an argument here; you are only presenting the research of others. So I would avoid some of the more speculative claims you make. Finally, fix the grammatical and mechanical mistakes and avoid general claims like "It is agreed that...".