User talk:JaneDoe023/Gender roles in islam/Tiya19 Peer Review

Peer review
Your article was great so Far! You are doing great with reorganizing the article. I like how you were adding information to other parts of the article, not just one paragraph. The format looks good. Your citations worked and had the references of your research. I would add the citations to the article with the citation icon. (I know you have the citations written in the article) The citation links help with the format not just with the bibliography. Your information was presented clear and easy to understand. I would just make sure to have two more references to add to your article. Also, the little notes to yourself in your draft are great reminders.Tiya19 (talk) 17:33, 22 October 2021 (UTC)