User talk:Jangola27/sandbox

In the first paragraph, this sentence "(though from their point of view regain) the land handed by the United Nations to Israel" needs a subject and also you need to remove these. I think that the second paragraph is very confusing and it needs to be simpler or easy to understand .And also it need more commas and periods for have shorter sentences and easy to understand.LupithaGarcia (talk) 01:59, 19 February 2015 (UTC)