User talk:Janislaw20

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Peer Review
Hey Josh,

First off I commend you for starting this article from complete scratch. Your overview sets up your article really nicely. I would probably reword the first sentence to say, “Today in Guatemala as in many Latin American countries, LGBT individuals…” I actually think your article flows super well, or as well as a wikipedia article should because your different sections all contain relevant details that don’t contradict one another. I would perhaps suggest (depending on your research) separating history of LGBT life in Guatemala from current attitudes or create a different section or subsection on the role of the Church because it seems like it plays a substantial role. Your piece sounds super interesting you’re a really amazing writer! Can’t wait to read the final thing! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lolamakombo (talk • contribs) 03:43, 11 April 2017 (UTC)