User talk:Jantzenh

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Hello, Jantzenh, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Edit
Hey! I think your edits are a good work in progress, and only target a few portions of your article. There's definitely room for improvement in terms of formatting, as well as with content in the Summary and the "Death" section. The details you added about the funeral are descriptive, but not always clear, and the source doesn't seem wholly reliable (looks like a blog), you might want to look for something more reliable! Overall, good work so far. Hahmad1996 (talk) 05:16, 9 March 2017 (UTC)