User talk:Jaquan moore/History of the iPhone

Jaquan Moore peer review
Hello so far I think your paragraph is well written and I would only add a couple more things. I Would add at least 2 more sources because I believe the minimum requirement for this is 5 sources. Another thing is I think you should expand the text a bit more and go more into detail on each point. I do believe we have a 500 word minimum requirement, but its still early in the writing process and so far it looks great. I would write a bit more information about the first iPhone and maybe go into detail about the models that came after that one.