User talk:Jaquan moore/History of the iPhone/Bibliography

Marcus' Peer Review
Hi Jaquan, I was reading your article and so far it's a good start so far. I do have a few recommendations though for you. I'm sure this is a giving, but there should be more sources. I know our articles aren't closed to being complete, but there should probably be a few more sources than one. he other feedback I have for you is, correct me if I'm wrong, but we are supposed to be adding on to a wiki page not writing your own. I think the information that you wrote was already on the wiki for the history of phones. I would try looking for key information that the history of I phones might have missed and write about that. Other then that great work so far.