User talk:Jarbev

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roll'd (July 16)
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TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 07:19, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roll'd (July 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nearlyevil665 was:

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nearlyevil 665  07:29, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roll'd (July 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Curb Safe Charmer was:

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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 13:45, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roll'd (July 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

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Theroadislong (talk) 07:32, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Roll'd has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Roll'd. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 09:27, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

July 2021
Hello Jarbev. The nature of your edits, such as the one you made to Draft:Roll'd, gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are extremely strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are  required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Jarbev. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form:. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 09:30, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Thank you kindly - I will absolutely declare. Jarbev (talk) 09:33, 18 July 2021 (UTC).

Could you assist is making me understand where this detail must go ? or assist in what's next best steps. I'm an advocate for the brand (an employee) but we would like a Wiki listing. We don't have to use terms I've used but keen on a Wiki page. What do I need to do now? Jarbev (talk) 09:37, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * We don't have "wiki listings" or "Wiki pages" we have articles which are based on reliable sources on topics that pass the criteria at WP:NCORP. Theroadislong (talk) 10:00, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Thanks. This is drafted very similar to the likes of Shake Shack and Itsu (UK) but seemingly is not OK. Same types of resources/citations (media articles). I'm keen to understand what else we can do to get this approved. Jarbev (talk) 11:14, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Who is "we" Wikipedia accounts are strictly for single person use. itsu has been tagged for 6 years for poor sourcing, conflict of interest and reading like an advertisement so is not a good comparison, in any event other stuff exists is not a good argument. Theroadislong (talk) 12:26, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Roll'd
Hello, Jarbev. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Roll'd, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 04:03, 20 December 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Roll'd


Hello, Jarbev. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Roll'd".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 04:01, 20 January 2022 (UTC)