User talk:Jared Mildenhall

Helpful hints
Thanks for your contribution to Wikpedia. Please read edit summaries left by other editors as they tell you why changes are made and will help you learn the ins and outs of Wikipedia. There are a few particular issues with your first article Eyewatch. The article does not have a WP:LEAD section and I can't write one because the rest of the article only refers to NSW when Eyewatch is also used in Victoria. The article is not properly referenced - everything that is written in an article pretty m~uch needs a supporting reference, see WP:42. Lastly, some of your sources have been unreliable and have included putting links to other websites (such as Facebook) in the body of the article which we don't allow. Tokeep the article you will need to expand it to cover all states that have Eyewatch, and then created a lead that summarises the key points. Please do not undo the revisions of other editors without leaving a reason in the edit summary. Best wishes  Flat Out  let's discuss it  03:20, 30 January 2015 (UTC)


 * I haven't finished it yet and it is all being deleted as I type and save.--Jared Mildenhall (talk) 03:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Jared Mildenhall Its best not to create new articles that are a work in progress in the article mainspace. Work on it as a draft in your userspace until it meets Wikipedia standard, then move it to article space. Also, even if it sn't finished it still needs to comply with wikipedia policies and guidelines.  Flat Out  let's discuss it  03:42, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Too hard basket. Please delete the page.
 * I can't do that but you can blank the page which will result in deletion.  Flat Out  let's discuss it  04:07, 30 January 2015 (UTC)