User talk:Jaronsohn/sandbox

Peer Review: Edits to Martin Act Article
Hey Joey, I think this is a great selection for article editing. In particular, there is a lot of value to be added in--as you pointed out--the various use cases of the Martin Act sections as well as its general significance. The page is generally lacking in structure, so I would suggest breaking out your edits into discrete sections and adding headers to improve the page's navigability. I would also suggest looking critically at the sources used as citations. I don't know whether you plan on looking into the currently cited sources for accuracy, but given that two of the sources come from law firms (with maybe some skin in the game), it's something I would suggest.Ahavriliak (talk) 20:47, 11 May 2018 (UTC)