User talk:Jarradk98/sandbox

Peer Review of Draft
I suggest adding the definitions of each mentioned mental illness. Also, you might want to consider defining what a nuclear family is after this sentence "Nuclear families with a two parents and children were usually only possible when the whole family was owned by the same owner, otherwise families could be broken p among several different plantations". Lastly, you have a typo. It should read "…could be broken up among…". Chynichart (talk) 20:29, 2 November 2017 (UTC)