User talk:Jarrod Heffernan/sandbox

How's the draft coming along? Sources look good and I like how you've structured it. Feel free to drop me a line if you'd like me to review what you've got so far. AdamCF87 (talk) 14:43, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

Hey Jarrod, this is your peer reviewer David. After reading your article on CK2, here is some feedback I have for you. The article is well structured and ideas flow well into one another. The first paragraph still requires a summary of a few of the main points discussed in the body of the article. Some citations are still required. A picture related to the topic would help readers visualize the topic and improve the structure of the article. One final suggestion would be to include more links to other Wikipedia pages to give readers additional insight. The draft is excellent overall. Well done. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Davidschrampr (talk • contribs) 20:41, 28 November 2017 (UTC)