User talk:Jasleend/Tonkin snub-nosed monkey/Tds018 Peer Review

Lead 1.) The Lead is very descriptive and an excellent introduction to the Tonkin snub-nosed monkey. 2.) Though it's a good introduction to the species, perhaps shorten it. It's challenging to include the appropriate amount of information for an introduction. 3.) The Lead's information corresponds to the article's information well. 4.) Include more of your insight and researched information. Content 1.) The provided content gives a unique insight into the corresponding species. 2.) The information is newer, which is good. 3.) The Biology section in your sandbox draft provides essential information about the monkey's diet. Continue to build from that. Tone and Balance 1.) The content is neutral with no bias. 2.) I love the sections in the main article and the diet information in your sandbox. Provide information on breeding, reproduction, and human interaction, and continue building off conservation efforts. Sources and References 1.) The sources are reliable and relatively new from the main article and your sandbox. Be sure to find sources recently published (within 10 years) to provide more information. 2.) The content effectively reflects what the sources state. Be sure to include more references when making edits in your sandbox. 3.) The links I clicked on took me right to the websites where the information originated. Organization 1.) The information added in the sandbox is easy to follow. It provides further unique content on the monkeys. 2.) There are no apparent grammatical errors, but be sure that the content is easy to read and comprehend. 3.) All in all, the content is organized well. Images and Media 1.) The images in the main article enhance the understanding of the topic; it includes an image of the monkey and the designated range of the spaces. 2.) The images are appealing to the audience. Overall Impressions 1.) The content is very insightful on the monkeys' diet. It corresponds well with the content provided in the main article. 2.) Be sure to include sections on breeding, reproduction, behavior, and focus on conservation. 3.) Overall, you have a good lead on the topic. Be sure to incorporate more information, and keep up the good work!