User talk:Jasmair/New sandbox

Khuynh96's Peer Review
Overall, your content is off to a good start. It's important to keep in mind to avoid your own opinion in this. I feel like there are better wording for "it is important to keep in mind." I think it is beneficial for this article to have more references and hyperlinks that would make the article stronger. I'm unclear which direction you want to take this article towards, and how you would build the page up. There are good materials and case studies that would support your article.

Keep up the good work so far. Looking forward to see the final product! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Khuynh96 (talk • contribs) 05:25, 2 February 2019 (UTC)