User talk:Jasmine031502/Mental illness in ancient Greece/Georgina Hutchison Peer Review

Hi Jasmine, I took a look at your page and I think that an important edit would be to try and write it in an editorial style (which is in the banner so you probably know) but I would also look at the citation page. For me, they seem to be very incomplete and varying in information/ style. This could just help to organize information better. I think that the categories already divided in the page are good topics but could use a little bit more expansion. :)Georgina Hutchison (talk) 22:52, 24 November 2020 (UTC)