User talk:JasonHunt1/sandbox

Hey Jason,

You did a very good job of informing us about the penalties of Computer Trespass State by state level. If I were you, I would try to reduce the number of pronouns such as "He or She" and use the name. In addition, I would do some rewording on your last paragraph about the person you were walking to. One final thing is to include some pictures of court documents, or more hackers.

Best,

Mike Ogunji University of Cincinnati Class of 2023

Justin Thompson - feedback
Jason you did a very good job at reformatting. The article is more organized and easier to understand where to find the information I need. There is some details and things that can be added to make this a better article but you have created a very good structure for it and made it easier understand what to add.