User talk:Jasonliveplanet

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I work at Live Planet as a community manager under CEO Halsey Minor. I wanted to share a draft re-write of the Halsey Minor page. The current page is inadequately sourced, incomplete, and its emphasis on different topics seems random. I believe the proposed draft more accurately represents Halsey Minor’s career and fairly includes both his successes and failures. As I have a conflict of interest, I am asking for an independent editor to review the draft and provide any feedback. Jasonliveplanet (talk) 19:56, 8 May 2019 (UTC)

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I placed the request edit template at the top of your posting at Talk:Halsey Minor. This will list it on a page of requested edits and attract the attention of uninvolved editors who can review your changes. --Drm310 🍁 (talk) 21:42, 27 May 2019 (UTC)

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Drm310 🍁 (talk) 04:10, 28 May 2019 (UTC)

some concerns have been raised there as follows -


 * Almost $1/4$ of the ref tags used in this draft do not contain page parameter information added as an template. Instead, page ranges of approximately 40 pages are used.
 * 64% of the ref tags cited to the Barnes Hook source are unnecessary, because Barnes gets her information from the Reid and Turner sources.
 * The first line of the Bankruptcy section would receive a template, as it does not give a date: "Minor said he wanted to focus more on philanthropy and venture capitalism, rather than being a CEO." As the bankruptcy ostensibly occurred in 2014, the Flores Daily Press source used to verify this first sentence cannot be used (or the sentence doesnt belong in that section) since the source used to verify it was written 7 years prior to the bankruptcy filing.
 * Twelve additional claims within the Bankruptcy section would also receive templates, as dates are not ascribed to their occurrences either.
 * The draft does not specify the difference between the biological father who committed suicide (and who wasn't discovered until 1995) and the father who was a "real estate broker". The claims regarding the father(s) in the draft are in two separate sections, one at the beginning of the draft and the other at the end.
 * The draft contains several MOS:RELTIME errors.
 * The bankruptcy is addressed using partially inveigled claims: "Business Insider depicted the decline in Minor's wealth as the result of Minor going outside his specialty in tech."

Are there any of these that you could help address Jason, then are mostly wiki mark up stuff in the references and dates and pages? Govindaharihari (talk) 16:22, 17 June 2019 (UTC)