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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hsin-Chien Huang (May 14)
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 scope_creep Talk  23:58, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Hsin-Chien Huang has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Hsin-Chien Huang. Thanks!  scope_creep Talk  00:00, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Hsin-Chien Huang has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Hsin-Chien Huang. Thanks!  scope_creep Talk  00:02, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for your advise, I will continue working on modifying it. JasperHHW (talk) 00:12, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi Give me a shout when your finished. It should be a quick thing to find a couple of references. Once you do, I'll post it to mainspace.   scope_creep Talk  00:29, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

Hi I added more official document that you suggested me to add. Since the award was the first time raised in the year of 2017 so the only thing I can do was just cited its original page(74th Venice international film of VR) and they have explained the situation about the VR competition. I see this VR competition is also mentioned in the wiki page of the 74th festival. I modified not just the VR experience award but more lasted news. If there is anything more I should've do better pls let me know. Thanks JasperHHW (talk) 04:55, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Can you take out the embedded links, which are against policy, e.g. 2019 	Bodyless. You already have an example there.  It looks better already. The Venice Festival is a well-known international film festival, but there were only 22 entries. I don't how measures up either, but we'll see if anybody has a go at deleting it. Remove all embedded links, there is quite a lot and give me a shout when your finished.    scope_creep Talk  11:10, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

Hi there, I've deleted all the embedded external links, instead I added more reliable resource to explain some terms. Thank you so much for giving me these opinions. JasperHHW (talk) 13:18, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

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Thanks again, and happy editing!  scope_creep Talk  14:02, 16 May 2021 (UTC)