User talk:Jassytron/Obsessive–compulsive personality disorder

I thought the information you suggested adding was both important and relevant information to the topic of OCPD. It would make a useful addition to improving the article. One suggestion I do have for these points, is trying to find some more recent sources. Both of the sources given are around 15 years old and mention the DSM-iv, but I don't believe that is the most recent manual used by professionals because it's outdated. The DSM-iv is nearly 30 years old (it was published in 1994). Currently, the DSM-5 (published in 2013) is used more frequently in practice. The Obsessive–compulsive personality disorder article even mentions the DSM 5 already, but doesn't mentioned the DSM-iv. MLYCCX (talk) 00:27, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article does a great job of keeping a neutral tone! It sounds like something that would be found in an encyclopedia and not something meant to persuade or conclude things. You may need to add a little more content to your draft before finally posting it. One suggestion I have for being able to add more information is the "Millon's subtypes" section. This entire section seems to be based off a single source, which shows unbalance. The "Diagnosis" section is also seriously lacking of sources. There are only 2 short sentences that have been cited for the whole huge section. You might be able to follow up and find more sources to expand and revise both of these sections. MLYCCX (talk) 00:27, 24 March 2022 (UTC)