User talk:JaxLax

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (October 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Domdeparis was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Domdeparis (talk) 12:47, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Peter's Railway (October 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

{{divbox|orange|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia.his is essentially an advertisement for te books. You need to show the encyclopedic importance by the standards of WP:NBOOK-- major third party reviews in accepted reliable sources. There are not any references of that sort present. Please do not resubmit the article until you do have them. {{clear}}
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:DGG&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Peter%27s_Railway  my talk page].

 DGG ( talk ) 06:59, 12 October 2017 (UTC)