User talk:Jaybickchick

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Hello, Jaybickchick, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Sandbox draft
Hi! I made a few tweaks to the section that you had in your sandbox. Mostly what I did was just tighten the content up a little, although I did leave out the final sentence in the section since that could be seen as a bit non-neutral. The main thing that you really need to do right now is find sourcing, as you will need sourcing to back up the claims. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:14, 18 October 2017 (UTC)