User talk:Jaydahol/sandbox

Jayda has added some very useful information that improves the article as a whole. The picture Jayda added has especially improved the article as it shows the extent of PPE that medical staff had to wear when treating covid-19 patients.

Even though Jayda's contribution is very informative and useful, it would have been good to see her contribution and article together, to see if it flowed well. This could have been achieved by Jayda suggesting where within the article she would put her contribution. For example, subtitled under 'impact on education' before Universities.

This section Jayda wants to add into the article has neutral content and reliable sources. However, I believe it could be a little clearer. A clear subtitle could be added to achieve this. The structure is good and I believe the information gathered by Jayda will fit well into the whole article.

All the sources used work and are easy to access. The information from the sources is also very up to date.

Peer reviewed by Louise Bradley

LouiseBradley46 (talk) 18:24, 3 December 2020 (UTC)