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Maybe I should add more details about what it means to be bold. --JayeBrew (talk) 18:11, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

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Sustainable Diet Review — Isagreen
•	First Note: The citations are quite erratic, which has been marked with a banner on the page. Not only do they make little sense, but many of the citations don’t appear to be citations at all which threatens the credibility of the article overall. Further, some of the sources do not appear to be academic, and with such little sourcing, it in some ways calls into question the topic's notability. •	Second Note: I would suggest adding a photo to lift the quality of this page. Potentially one of the foods incorporated in a sustainable diet, or maybe one that is an example of what not to eat in a sustainable diet. A really quick one to add would be a picture of some fast-food item from Wikimedia as the example of a “don’t eat.” •	Third Note: Some of the section headers are a little misleading about the topics that follow. For example, the section titled “Sustainable Diets in Practice” suggests that it will discuss examples of sustainable diets and how they are practiced by those who engage them. However, it's mostly a description of social aspects/responses to sustainable diets. I suggest potentially reorganizing and renaming these sections, so the topics are clearer. For example, in the above section, you could provide case studies of the diets mentioned previously in the article, such as the “Nordic Diet.” •	Fourth Note: While the article is about sustainable diets helping to slow down Global Change, there is not a lot of info provided on the way that unsustainable diets harm the environment. Would like to see more on the HDGEC as related to social concepts of diets that are perpetuated through the current neoliberal capitalist agricultural system. •	A very potentially valuable article on the way our diets impact the environment, and how a “sustainable diet” can mitigate some of this impact. With a bit of work, mostly in adding sources and making the citations clear, this article will certainly meet Wikipedia’s good article standards!

Best, Isagreen (talk) 03:02, 24 February 2021 (UTC)