User talk:Jayp2919/sandbox

Hi Jay,

Great job on your article! I think it begins strongly, with a concise description of non scarring hair loss, its causes, and treatments. I really like the use of headings and subheadings, as they nicely organize and categorize the information presented. The sources/references used are appropriate and properly cited. Overall, I think your article is well-written and at the appropriate reading level, and the text flow is smooth. Keep up the good work!!

Annpharris (talk) 20:07, 28 August 2020 (UTC)Ann