User talk:Jaypeemac/sandbox

=Peer Review= After looking at your article and reviewing it I have come to these conclusions. I firstly want to say that I honestly don’t know what medical data mining is. Even though your article talks about it, the language doesn’t seem like ordinary everyday language so it is difficult to understand. It seems as though the sources you have used are credible and reliable, although one of the sources was a New York Times article, which might be a little biased in it’s thoughts, this maybe should be addressed. Overall the edit you have started seems a little too specific and doesn’t use everyday language that makes it easy to understand. I hope that this is helpful and can be used to improve your edit. Kjmms1 (talk) 20:15, 27 March 2019 (UTC)