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Potential Article to be improved.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Chinese_Americans

Improvements to be made.

-There were 2 large waves of Chinese immigration into to United States, not 3.

-Does not state the reasons for Chinese exclusion act. Needs to add that Chinese immigrants worked for lower wages (to send money back home to families) thus, white workers were out of work.

-The Scott Act in 1888 prohibited Chinese immigrants from re-entry into the United States after a visit to China, this tore many families apart as many Chinese immigrants decided to stay in the US for work to support their families back home.

-Should include to statistics of Chinese immigration. Does not tell us how many Chinese immigrated into the United States -- past and current.

-To add to the previous point Chinese immigration has increased six-fold since 1980, failing to report this significant increase in the article.

-Very little - none information on means of entry. Chinese immigrants come into the US mostly through higher-education and enrollment in their institutions. Statistic should be one-third of all international students are Chinese, approximately 329,000 students.

-California has the largest population of Chinese immigrants (~500,000, 31.8% of all in US), then followed by New York(~350,000, 22.2% of all in the US), another statistic that the article failed to state.