User talk:Jayshome

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Unit 2 Assignment Review
What does the article (or section) do well?

-Great lead for the article. I was able to immediately understand the concept.

What changes would you suggest overall?

-I would suggest renaming the section "factors of bubble growth" if you are just going to only have what is in there right now.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?

-I am not exactly sure what will go in both the potential aftermath or prevention. It may be important to ensure that if writing these two sections to present multiple cited opinions for each.

Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!

-I can't think of anything in particular but I do appreciate the article. I cannot believe this wasn't already create, great on you to create it yourself.

Gomez.alexa (talk) 02:46, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Unit 2: Review
What does the article (or section) do well?

-The intro was good and informative. The two sections you have written are well thought out and you use a good amount of links to other articles.

What changes would you suggest overall?

- You've got a stray = in your Retail category. Other than that, not much.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?

-So far, you don't have much so I can't comment here, but just make sure that on top of linking to other articles, you've got good sources

Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!

-Not right now, but I'll make sure to check back when the article is more fleshed out.

Tykam993 (talk) 04:24, 23 March 2017 (UTC)