User talk:Jaytro6560/sandbox

I think your article is at a great start! I feel that it can get oversimplified in parts and could really use some more solid statistics and scholarly opinions. I think it is a tough article though because many of the sections reference elsewhere and so only a basic summary of those is actually needed. Due to the reference elsewhere, I think that the focus here should be on how it ties to reproductive health. I am also wondering if men should be mentioned at all (is there a tie to the male role in reproductive health?).

UniversityofUtahGrad (talk) 01:15, 9 April 2018 (UTC)