User talk:JazzAfterHours

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Hello, JazzAfterHours, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one of your contributions does not conform to Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View policy (NPOV). Wikipedia articles should refer only to facts and interpretations that have been stated in print or on reputable websites or other forms of media.

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Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. You must also reply to the COI request above. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  07:00, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your reply. I've had another look, restored the text and removed opinions and non-neutral terms, In particular, note that Haynes is a talented abstractionist and remarkable colourist...He has unique ability to insert into his works light, shadow, heat and reflection.[10] His landscape works in this style are nostalgic and treasured by Western Australians for the depiction of their State.[11] Haynes has mastered the capture of essential features of the diverse landscapes of WA, be they the hot red earths and formations of the goldfields, Pilbara and Kimberley; the bright sands and iridescent blue waters of Fremantle, Rottnest and other coastal areas; or dappling of light and shadow in the forest of the south-west and shimmering reflections along the Margaret River.[12] is just opinions. The fact that someone has said it, which you referenced, doesn't make it objective fact, and cherry-picking positive reviews looks like a fan page. Stick to real facts, once you start quoting, you are in trouble. He's probably notable because in terms of Notability (people). I've nowikied the afc tags, remove the nowiiki when you are ready Jimfbleak - talk to me?  07:45, 9 February 2020 (UTC)


 * I've added his own site as an EL, you could perhaps do the same for the art collective, but don't go overboard creating lots of ELs Jimfbleak - talk to me?  07:52, 9 February 2020 (UTC)

Thanks Jimfbleak. Really appreciate the feedback and opportunity to develop the skill set and draft page. I’ll keep it more objective on the real facts as you say. Thanks again and speak soon.

Your draft article, Draft:George Haynes


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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! JMHamo (talk) 08:33, 10 August 2020 (UTC)