User talk:Jbloom3

'''Please leave me comments with your signature , Thank you''' Jbloom3 (talk) 07:18, 20 February 2012 (UTC)

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Message from cheaal01
Hello Jason Hello! My name is Alyssa Cheadle. This semester, I will be available to provide help in understanding how to get work done in Wikipedia.

I am a graduate student in Psychology at UCLA. Last semester, I edited Wikipedia articles as part of a course in Social Psychology. I worked on the article "Just World Hypothesis," and I was able to nominate my article for a Wikipedia "Did You Know" feature. I found the assignment effective in helping me learn about my topic, the culture and norms of Wikipedia, and writing articles from a neutral point of view for a lay audience. I learned some valuable lessons while completing my assignment and I will be glad to offer advice to you!

Please contact me with questions; I prefer to be contacted via email.

Good luck! Alyssa Click here to reply  InstructorCommentBot (talk) 21:38, 3 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of cheaal01 (talk)

Message from cheaal01
Good Job, Jason!

LEAD SECTION:You can improve the lead section by making it more of a stand-alone concise summary of the article. Giving some context for the article within the field of memory studies would be helpful to the lay reader.

LANGUAGE:You have avoided using field-specific jargon and explained them when necessary

LINKS:You have provided links to other Wikipedia articles.

CITATION:You have cited facts from reputable, accessible, and up-to-date sources.

WRITING:Your writing typically uses correct grammar, verb tenses, and spelling. You may want to change the bullet point format of some sections to paragraph format. Whether or not you do so, it would be helpful to make sure all information is presented in complete sentences. Additionally, the = signs used do not seem formal enough for the article.

CATEGORY:It is useful to try to categorize the page. It will help others to find the article more easily.

It is unclear what you are presenting in the \"Article Briefs\" section.

Click here to reply InstructorCommentBot (talk) 05:43, 5 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of cheaal01 (talk)