User talk:Jbrut

WP:NPOV
Point of view edits, as the ones you added to Shawn Brady are not allowed and have been reverted. Please play in the sandbox and not within articles. KellyAna (talk) 00:31, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * You put your opinion, not fact. You missed the years Bo and Shawn really hated each other, regardless, the information is unnecessary. KellyAna (talk) 01:44, 29 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Why do you get to decide what is neccesary? I actually think it is neccesary, as well as an inclusion of Frankie and Max in Shawn's family. If I write such information in a fact based way, will you continue to delete it? Jbrut
 * You didn't write anything in a fact based way, you wrote it in a personally emotional way. Facts have backing and reference.  If you can do that and make it grammatically and Wikipedia correct, it can stay.  It also has to be not overly wordy and has to be based in fact, present tense, and lacking emotion. KellyAna (talk) 02:15, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * I've corrected it to be factual, grammatical, and present tense. KellyAna (talk) 02:21, 29 February 2008 (UTC)

Thank you. I'm still feeling my way through the whole wikipedia thing, so I appreciate your explanation of how this all works:) jbrut