User talk:Jburnsi14

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Hello, Jburnsi14, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Great start! However, the content is a little lacking. Adding more information and statistics would be helpful to give a fuller picture of the disease. As far as grammar is concerned, the sentences could be characterized as run-on sentences. Be careful of that. I like that you used a reference from the CDC and then another from a medical journal. Adding more references would help build your content. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hygieia.viden (talk • contribs) 04:23, 20 November 2017 (UTC)