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Raja Stivy peer review
It looks like there is some good usable information in this section. You did a good job at finding information on epidemiology for Loa Loa. There did seem to be a few spelling and grammatical errors found within the section. I also wonder if there would be a way within this epidemiology section to split this information into sub-sections with headings? One other comment would be that it looks like most of the epidemiology is on prevalence or incidence, would there be any information on mortality? I found it interesting how you end it with the conclusion of a study predicting the disease migrating to Europe and the United States. Overall, a lot of good information with credible sources.