User talk:Jcallahan2019/Drug courts in the United States

Dan's review
Great find with your research, Justin. You've found useful data to add to this section of this Wikipedia topic, and the insight that the cost difference might not be statistically significant is important.

A few thoughts:

-I might considering adding your section to the end of the next paragraph (the one that starts with "on the other hand"), rather than keeping it where it is. It seems that you're addition is in keeping with the other data in that paragraph that questions the cost savings

-Rather than "current research," I'd indicate both the group that did the research (the National Institute of Justice) and the year it was completed (2013).

-I didn't find the "$2.31" data in your source -- is that referring to the previous paragraph? If so, I might frame it not as "previously held belief" but -- again -- name the institution and the year that it came out.

-There are a few little typos, too (like "it" instead of "is") in the third sentence. Just read it over a couple times to make sure you catch those. Overall, though, I think this will end up being a really great contribution to this article! Daniel.messier (talk) 16:29, 7 August 2019 (UTC)